Metroid-inspired mech girl
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I want to try and step up my concepting and modeling a little, design-wise as well as technically, because I feel I've been slacking.
This is gonna be Metroid-inspired, mostly in the sense of, I want to make a girl in a mech armor, and I want to make a morph ball form of it.
I really like how the design elements of Samus' different armors carry over to their respective morph ball forms. The actual design itself, I'm not gonna specifically try and capture the Metroid style (gonna go for something bulkier with no helmet), but who knows how it'll end up.
Here's some stuff I gathered for inspiration:
And here's some initial sketches for the suit and the girl. Not really happy with them yet, don't know if I should try to mess with these more, or do a bunch of new ones. Whaddya think?
original post:
I want to try and step up my concepting and modeling a little, design-wise as well as technically, because I feel I've been slacking.
This is gonna be Metroid-inspired, mostly in the sense of, I want to make a girl in a mech armor, and I want to make a morph ball form of it.
I really like how the design elements of Samus' different armors carry over to their respective morph ball forms. The actual design itself, I'm not gonna specifically try and capture the Metroid style (gonna go for something bulkier with no helmet), but who knows how it'll end up.Here's some stuff I gathered for inspiration:
And here's some initial sketches for the suit and the girl. Not really happy with them yet, don't know if I should try to mess with these more, or do a bunch of new ones. Whaddya think?
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I do like the direction you're heading in with 1 and 2 with somewhat of an organic suit of armor idea but it could be pushed a little further
I did a whole bunch more silhouettes, headless and with head, I want to try and take this whole concepting thing seriously for a change. :P I'm still kind of struggling with the whole process, the garbage vs. usable stuff ratio is still way too low IMO.
I did however end up with a design I liked. I'm sorry, I was way too attached to the whole headless thing to let go of it, lol. I did try and make it look a bit more natural as if an actual human would fit in there (drew it over the outline of a human figure). I guess if you squint there's sort of a head outline, though.
And here's some girl sketches, I think I like the left and upper right hairstyles most, but I'd love to hear some opinions.
This is the last time I'll mess with the concept, next I'll have some modeling done.
The mid-right one looks like a lackey, and the bottom-right one has an air of importance, but nothing really fun to look at without knowing the story.
Why are stylized big thighs bad?
Alex Pointer: I'll definitely move the plates a little further apart. I had this whole thing in mind where the arms of the armor bend as a whole, like a tube, while them being quite roomy inside would still allow the angular bend of a human arm inside. But even considering that you're right that the plating makes it too rigid as it is now. Gonna work on that.
YoutLeaderVal: Yeah I think I'll go with the upper right one. I can't quite visualize your idea with the organic looking protrusions though. Kinda like stabilizers?
dpaynter26: Haha sorry man, I like big thighs and i cannot lie. ;D I kinda wanted to differentiate her from Samus in design and also body type. I appreciate your two cents, though.
Crits very welcome btw.
If anything's off, technically or otherwise, I'd love to hear it.
lots of edges feel too pinched though.
also, surface gets messy in some areas, like legs right below the ass have those little bumps and whatnot. i guess it ain't easy to get it right with all those cuts and circles.
I wouldn't expect you to want to change it so late now but the square head piece you've chosen really breaks the design flow form me. And it's abstract from the rest of the shapes already in use, my eyes would expect more curves to continue the flow. Actually the very first two concepts were good examples of this.
Well anyway you've shown good concept to end product skills either way so congrats
First is the location on the arm. Most guns of this nature start at the elbow and cover the entire forearm, which makes them look a lot more comfortable to use when dealing with recoil. It's hard to tell where the gun is situated in regards to the pilot in the suit, but on the suit itself it seems to start right above the wrist.
The second thing that bugs me is the protrusion on top of the gun. The design gives the impression that's the direction the barrel is supposed to move due to the recoil, which would send the pilot's arm flying in a weird direction at best and break her wrist at worst.
Pinched, as in too sharp? There's an edgesplit modifier still there, I should remove that to soften up those edges a bit. If that's what you meant anyway.
And yeah, the bumps.
Yeah I don't think I'll put a different head on at this stage (it reads a lot as a head, although I initially intended for it to be more of an extension of the torso, a "headless" design). I agree on the flow though, I think it looks a bit better in the final concept drawing, whaddya think? I've messed with the head and arms a little to kinda try to capture that a bit better.
Yeah the gun's kinda iffy. I'm resisting temptation to just throw it out and redo it at this point, haha. I agree it looks a little weird compared to established arm cannon designs that start at the elbow, I guess I just wanted to be all different, but I'm not sure it worked out. :P I imagine the arm motors/hydraulics being pretty strong to deal with the recoil (the arms are pretty huge).
The hand on the left isn't indicative of where her real hands are, because it's some kinda extended robot hand. I would imagine her fist would be sitting right at the gun's circular base connection. So wrist breakage shouldn't be an issue in that case, I hope?
Thanks a lot for the detailed response.
12410 tris, 2048 texture (diffuse, spec, normal, emission)
Are there too many uv islands? I don't know how to really decrease the number of them any further without major distortion, is it just a matter of simpler modeling?
Absolutely inspiring stuff, I love the clean texture, but I can't help but be intrigued by the thought of a more worn version.
Maybe a short walk or other animations would bring more life to her.
Like Daft.Eng says I can see her moving around, springing into action at times.
I agree, you could try giving it a minimal dirt/grunge/scratches pass.
I also think that you could add a smoke-y/cloud-y specular map for the metallic parts to really break it up in places.
Also focus of the specular alot, metal is often defined in the specular more than the diffuse as a way to differentiate material differences.
keep it up dude