Cheers for the comments guys!
Yeah I was originally going to push the proportions more towards the style of Scarecrow from Rock Steady's Batman series. Once I'd modeled the armour he became a little more bulked out than intended and had not really noticed just how long the forearms and fingers are.
@michaelmilette - Yeah the metal on the cloak certainly ways it down, but I wanted to bring elements of the original concept of Talon from League of Legends. During his attacks he utalizes these as he flares the cloak.
@chrisradsby - I think I'll have a whirl at more variation in colour throughout the texture. I think bringing colder colours into the shadows will help, and some warm tones into the highlights of the metal.
@whw - I'll make some tweaks and then hopefully have some cooler poses!
Again.... great to hear such positive feedback from you all
Here's the texture and a quick grab of the wireframe, will work on my presentation of these for my portfolio ;)