I like the style of t sofar, nice shapes
I agree about the cloth though. Ans that piece of paper really should just be one quad. If you want you could make a very simple version of the cloth, maybe 4 or 6 tris and bake the AO from this one to use as a base for your texturing. This would give you some guidance on where to paint the folds etc. Saying that though, I think you should just make it mega low poly and paint it all in! Stick "hand painted cloth texture" in to google search and it should give you some good inspiration
You could take the candles down a bit too, they are looking pretty high poly, maybe you could get rid of that loop in the middle of them. And it might be nice to make the table edges ever so slightly wonky
Give it a little bit more character.