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created Sketchbook: Moshbeast
on 07-20-2011 01:32 PM
Hi there lads I'm a games design student and would like to improve my modeling and even more my texturing since I haven't put much work in it lately
So I am quite looking forward to any criticism or suggestions in regards to my models and textures you guys have.

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in this case the texture is not mine and i just manipulated the brightness and contrast a bit in photoshop
Here is a bit of a random idea a ballista that has small charges attached to it with ropes. before a launch the rope is ignited so it slowly burns through. once the rope fails the bombs fall and cause a sort of carpet bombing

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didn't know you had a sketchbook two! UPDATE GOGOGOGO!
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Ok here is another piece that I finished a few days ago for a university project

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becareful with the highlights they seem to follow the UV guidelines to much but great work with the textures sooooooooooooo much better!  the troll shield is my fav.
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mine too :P
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and here is the last in the series of equipment for the brief a little axe :P

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ok forgot one this really is the last one

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Nice scene you have there.  A couple things I might suggest though are a little more detail on the pillars and maybe a different texture on the ceiling. It looks a little weird having it the same as the walls. Maybe it could have wood planks.
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thx kosh  i was going to add more detail to the pillars as a resubmission and thx for the ceiling advice ill give that a try 
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Christoph, so much improvement here!
Your presentation skills have got much better, rendering on black background is never a good thing but you see, to have worked on that a lot.
Last couple of entries are pretty cool. The atmosphere of the lights on inside adds a lot to the scene, good job!
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thank you 
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here is my latest work

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