@Bon, haha, yes.. chicken penis is a bit suspect... i dont really want to give him thinner ankles.. as i want him to look rather flabby, i could thin them down a little, but maybe widening his heel/foot would serve the same purpse?
@Sectaurs, I think i went a bit OTT with my b/w overlays on the face instead of actually painting darker shades, resulting in the black, will probably try fix this with some colour corrections if possible. With the whole noise thing, i was aiming to get the character looking pretty busy, not your typical smooth skinned ogre ;) but more of a wrinkled toad... Might have over done it? Looking at the legs now, from the side they do seem too wide and not very well formed, will adjust this.
I'm not quite sure what you mean by the inconsistency, are you refering to the lack of shadowing where the shorts meet with the legs?
You've encounted some monstrous vaginas in your time if thats what you instantly thought ;) It's meant to be a rough dent/cut in the middle of the metal peice, yes.
Cheers for the fresh eyes on this, so easy to get bogged down thinking everything looks fine once you've been staring at it for so long.