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Hey everyone,

I've been actively working for Flaming Brain Studios and wanted to post some recent work and get some comments and critiques on the work at hand. I'm looking for anywhere that I can improve. Thanks.




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I think your alien creature thing looks cool but the eyes are really small and blend in with the character. I think it would look a lot better with a much larger and a much different color eye.
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Thanks for the reply BARDLER I'll definitely look into fixing the eyes.
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Looking good. I'm guessing the intention of the Lakos was to be very straight like that, but if not I think it could use a little boost in it's front silhouette, such as the back legs being further apart than the front, and the tentacle parts in relation to the rest of the body.
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yea he needs to be rigged and posed for a more dynamic touch. That will be the next update soon enough.
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