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Old (#1)
Hi all,

I've been working on my new portfolio layout since yesterday.

www.leminhnhat.com

Some "new" contents, but nothing extraordinary on the artworks.
I would like to have some feedback on the presentation itself, because I know I'll need to improve A LOT more on my artworks.
Are my texts readable? Is it too small? Are the links easy to find? Anything wrong or unprofessional?

Thanks for support!
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Old (#2)
I like your layout, clean, simple

the text are a bit too small for my liking

great stuff man

maybe more breakdown of each piece? texture sheet, wireframe?
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Lookin' good, ditch lonely soldier though, brings the site down a bit imo.
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Yes I agree with them. Some wireframe shot and remove the Lonely Soldier.
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Your site is pretty good, very clean and easy to navigate.

You might want to change your header and title to read "3D environment artist", rather than "3d environment art student". Adding "student" to anything generally seems to bring it's perceived quality and your own value down.

On your resume you should use the word "experience" instead of "experiences". Also "Softwares" should be something like "Software Knowledge".

I agree with the others about removing lonely solder, it's just not at the same quality level as the rest.

Off topic:

Now your avatar makes perfect sense to me.
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Thanks for the feedback everyone!
I appreciate your time!
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The Sun Lounger is epic win.

As Ben mentioned
Just rename 3d environment art student and get rid of "art student". Consider yourself a professional
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Thanks kaburan!
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pssst, capitalize Environment Artist. It's a title, not a sentence ;)

Keep it up!
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Also, it's not a huge detail, but résumé is spelt with ALT-130 characters
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clicked on the link without even looking at the name.. i was all "ive seen this work before..." lol. great stuff on there, i really digg the wall. grats on that for SMC07.
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@kaburan: I've just changed the capitalization of my title. Thanks for the tip!
@Don Karnage: Done! Thanks for that! I just mind that people don't often use the accent on this word.
@Oniram: Thanks! I suppose that you recognize the wall on GA SM. This one is the high-poly version, hope to find more time to texture it!
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