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created Modular Construction Project: LIbrary
on 09-11-2010 07:01 PM
Last edited by Stitch; 09-11-2010 at 07:09 PM..
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, null,
11 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
Location Vancouver, BC -- Sarasota, FL
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Great stuff
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, line,
88 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
Location Cambridge MA
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cool , how did you go about doing the domes?
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, triangle,
346 Posts,
Join Date Jul 2010,
Location Huntsville, AL
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Looks nice so far! Just all those book cases look the same. See if you can put some variation in them.
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, spline,
237 Posts,
Join Date Sep 2009,
Location The Netherlands
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That is very very pretty
some breakdowns of modular bits would be awesome 
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, polygon,
691 Posts,
Join Date Feb 2010,
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I recognised it right away. Are you going to include the busts as well?
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, spline,
177 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2008,
Location Ireland
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Are there no lights in this library? Its relly dark in there, the scene needs more light composition alongside the godrays trough the window. You really need to expolit the UDKs lighting abilities, the scene really need more atmosphere. Would be really cool if you could see some dust particles in the godrays that come trough the windows.
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, polygon,
585 Posts,
Join Date Feb 2008,
Location Tarsier Studios, Sweden
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awesome
can i see how you did the lighting?
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, polycounter,
797 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
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Thanks for the comments; I revisited the scene a little while ago with some feedback i received - working on lighting opportunities and getting the scene a little more populated.
@Jungsik the lighting was relatively straight forward. A DD for the sunlight and then subtle point lights without shadows for fill.

Last edited by Stitch; 08-15-2011 at 03:07 AM..
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, null,
11 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
Location Vancouver, BC -- Sarasota, FL
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what about the ceiling? No lights there?
Nice work so far! 
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,644 Posts,
Join Date Sep 2009,
Location Sweden/Malmö
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I feel like the art is right, but the lighting is really not at level you'd expect it to be. The result is that your art end up looking less good than it could.
The fog is too strong or too green-saturated at the moment, and the scene is missing some pools of lights to create contrasts and draw your eye around.

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, polycounter,
867 Posts,
Join Date Feb 2009,
Location Belgium
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I like the atmosphere of the library.
The only critic I would give is the repetition. Put more variation on the books cover so they don't look the same everywhere. Otherwise, great job! 
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, polygon,
612 Posts,
Join Date Aug 2010,
Location Montreal, Qc, Canada
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