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ok...i find someone to help me in the animations...I think i can continue on it. 
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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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Wow these models look great! I can't wait to see what it looks like with textures! I don't have the time to build one this month for the contest, but I hope to try my hand at making a new sentry at some point also 
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, null,
5 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
Location California
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I'm glad you found someone to help you out, what a relief 
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, spline,
116 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Florida, USA
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You have successfully struck fear into the heart of every Spy in the TF2 universe. I would be scarred to sap that beast.
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, null,
6 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
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Hello people, i worked over this sentry this week, i finished the mapping part of the level 1 - RED (yeah, i love RED) later i will finish the BLU version.

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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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The texture on the body is a bit noisy on the right side, compared to the left which looks great. Could possibly do without the logo or the G-12. The overall shape is great, and should I say more adorable than the regular baby sentry.
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, vertex,
25 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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Quote:
Originally Posted by eisiger
The texture on the body is a bit noisy on the right side, compared to the left which looks great. Could possibly do without the logo or the G-12. The overall shape is great, and should I say more adorable than the regular baby sentry.
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people are more bound to attack the side with the interface on it no?
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, polygon,
526 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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Yeah, the red logo clashes with the rest of the sentry. Other wise, looking pretty sexy.
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, spline,
179 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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I .... theres something about it that dosent seem to fit the engineer. it seems to Futuristic. also Spikes, can we see it without them?
ive been taught the tricks and how to use the tools of the trade, Now only if i had said tools.
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, line,
55 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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hummm ok, the logo was in a weird place, here is the updated version without logo and with a more stylish G-12.

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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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its cool, but i dont think the engineer would let it fall into such disrepair. i mean, rusty is okay, but the vent in the back makes it look likes hes ignored it.
can we see them a bit fixed up?
ive been taught the tricks and how to use the tools of the trade, Now only if i had said tools.
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, line,
55 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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Quote:
Originally Posted by soso188
its cool, but i dont think the engineer would let it fall into such disrepair. i mean, rusty is okay, but the vent in the back makes it look likes hes ignored it.
can we see them a bit fixed up?
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humm...ok, i took note. I will see if more people think the vent is too much broken. I have no problem with the vent, but if the majority here thinks fix the vent is a good idea, i do 
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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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i'm loving it.
When i first saw the first version of the lv 3 i was blown away though. i didnt like it so much, but i love your new level three. i think it would be cool it if were fully defensive, and shot grenades instead of rockets. those barrels just make me think grenades more.
But it looks amazing none-the-less.
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, null,
14 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
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I don't really have an issue with the vent. Gives it character.
Than again, might not hurt to fix it up a bit.
Dear god, I'm such an indecisive bastard.
Fix up the vent and post a side by side comparison of the beat up vent. Than we'll all be able to better judge.
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, spline,
179 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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Never mind. i thought i was the only one
ive been taught the tricks and how to use the tools of the trade, Now only if i had said tools.
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, line,
55 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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Well..keep in mind that vent will be discarted in the upgrade to level 2. Think in that line of upgrade like the eng taking a half baked machine and upgrading it to the level max in better conditions etc.
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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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wow, cant believe i havent seen this one. nice turret, love the concept! My only crit would be that you still have too much dirt overlayed and not enough large brush strokes.
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Nice model, but the texture doesn't feel right.
Have you followed Swizzle's guide?
http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=73559
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, polygon,
726 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
Location Sweden
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Simski
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oh..nice find. I will try to make the red/blue areas with more "brush"effect. I never do that, let's see.
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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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great directions that thread give to me. I worked a bit more in the texture, put more brush strokes and less dirt. I cant wait to start the building animation >........<

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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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How about making the Logo a weathered white paint. Would pop out more...
WebGL Project - In a state of constant flux so might be down when you check it. Pretty old now.
Junior Technical Artist at Digital Extremes.
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,856 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
Location Toronto
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Quote:
Originally Posted by haiddasalami
How about making the Logo a weathered white paint. Would pop out more...
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i agree with this and btw the colours really are great with the texture  also what are your other ideas or dont you have any yet ?  love the sentry its so cute 
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, null,
18 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location hull
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Quote:
Originally Posted by hithron
i agree with this and btw the colours really are great with the texture  also what are your other ideas or dont you have any yet ?  love the sentry its so cute 
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ahhaa i have a lot of ideas for my "machinery garden" but dont have time to work on it. I will have luck if i can conclude this sentry 
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, spline,
183 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
Location Brazil
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What's with the curly logo? Looks really out of place. Anyway, the texture is getting there, but it's still too dirty. Take a look at the existing sentry texture.
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, spline,
124 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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I love this sentry design. I was really hoping someone was going to be bold/foolhardy enough to attempt a Sentry Gun remodel, and this utterly fails to disappoint me!
I don't envy you or Valve though, cuz I can only imagine that the construction and upgrades are going to be an enormous b!tch to animate. D:
Quote:
Originally Posted by hithron
also what are your other ideas or dont you have any yet ?
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This is the whole package. Each sentry level counts as a separate item towards the rules of the Polycount Pack Contest.
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, null,
17 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2010,
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