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Old (#26)
Looking great man!! I personally like his buggy eyes. The hi poly looks great as well.
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Old (#27)
reminds me of chucky haha
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Old (#28)
great proportions, super clean texture work, not a space marine or stupid-ass monster - and! - theres a puppy! awww a puppy.


This work deserves a high five, but alas - the internet.
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reminds me of chucky haha
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Old (#30)
+1 for the original, slightly wall-eyed version. The "cute" one I've seen a thousand times before. I like the creepy version, it's a bit "edgier".
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This turned out awesome. Love it!!!
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Old (#32)
excellent character. very well done bake to lopoly
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Old (#33)
+1 to the original over the 'cuter' version!
I like the attitude of the original much more.
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Old (#34)
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys!
I've tried to address the problems that have been mentioned. So here's the final shot I hope


Last edited by undoz; 02-24-2010 at 03:02 PM..
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Old (#35)
really great character and awesome base...i really really love it !...only thing i would do is give the dog a bit more pose...maybe show the dog jumping or so ...you know...only a littlebit more dynamical than now...
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Old (#36)
Spatz: Thanks man. I thought about it and I did some research on animation movie posters and other characters in this genre and usually the pose of the characters is pretty static, so I went with the easy option
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Old (#37)
Hey Undoz, really awesome work with the posed shot.

I just have a question. I was checking out your diffuse map for some inspiration (and tips ) and I couldn't seem to find the hair pieces? Am I missing them or are they genuinely hard to spot... or are they not there?!

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Old (#38)
How did you do the rendering?
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Old (#39)
Totally PRO! I am in love with it.
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Old (#40)
This style is totally fresh, love it!
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Old (#41)
fantastic stuff, undoz, i am your fan)
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Old (#42)
Really nice!
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Old (#43)
outstanding work!
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Old (#44)
Saved to the awesome folder !
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Old (#45)
Quote:
Originally Posted by neosorcerer View Post
maybe this will help

eyes are too wide, iris should be partly covered by eyelid
eyelashes?
eyebrows should be thicker
smaller mouth
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I agree , other then that this looks great
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Old (#46)
Idk I kind of like the creep factor. I think it makes it more hilarious. Nice grass stand btw
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Old (#47)
Whoa, thanks a lot for the comments guys! Very very honored to be here.

This is the last version of the model :



Cheers!
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Old (#48)
The only thing I would say is that I actually thought this was a little girl, not a little boy. I think its probably to do with the shape of the face and as neo pointed out, the eyebrows are too thin. Otherwise its a stellar character... looks on par with Pixar!
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Old (#49)
oh , i thought it was a little girl this whole time. haha. looking great
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Old (#50)
Nice Suggestion but Do what you have in your vision.

you done great job.
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