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Looking great man!! I personally like his buggy eyes. The hi poly looks great as well.
Currently Working at Rockstar as a Character Artist.
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, vertex,
34 Posts,
Join Date Sep 2009,
Location Vancouver/ New York
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reminds me of chucky haha
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, null,
23 Posts,
Join Date Apr 2007,
Location Pasadena, CA
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great proportions, super clean texture work, not a space marine or stupid-ass monster - and! - theres a puppy! awww a puppy.
This work deserves a high five, but alas - the internet.
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, line,
51 Posts,
Join Date May 2009,
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reminds me of chucky haha
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, null,
23 Posts,
Join Date Apr 2007,
Location Pasadena, CA
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+1 for the original, slightly wall-eyed version. The "cute" one I've seen a thousand times before. I like the creepy version, it's a bit "edgier".
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, polycounter,
847 Posts,
Join Date Dec 2004,
Location Edinburgh, Scotland
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This turned out awesome. Love it!!!
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, triangle,
381 Posts,
Join Date Feb 2009,
Location Santa Cruz, CA
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excellent character. very well done bake to lopoly
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, triangle,
387 Posts,
Join Date Jun 2007,
Location Germany
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+1 to the original over the 'cuter' version!
I like the attitude of the original much more.
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, veteran polycounter,
3,140 Posts,
Join Date Oct 2004,
Location Amsterdam
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Thanks a lot for the feedback guys!
I've tried to address the problems that have been mentioned. So here's the final shot I hope

Last edited by undoz; 02-24-2010 at 03:02 PM..
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, spline,
125 Posts,
Join Date Aug 2009,
Location Iceland
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really great character and awesome base...i really really love it !...only thing i would do is give the dog a bit more pose...maybe show the dog jumping or so ...you know...only a littlebit more dynamical than now...
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, triangle,
381 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
Location Hamburg
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Spatz: Thanks man. I thought about it and I did some research on animation movie posters and other characters in this genre and usually the pose of the characters is pretty static, so I went with the easy option 
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, spline,
125 Posts,
Join Date Aug 2009,
Location Iceland
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Hey Undoz, really awesome work with the posed shot.
I just have a question. I was checking out your diffuse map for some inspiration (and tips  ) and I couldn't seem to find the hair pieces? Am I missing them or are they genuinely hard to spot... or are they not there?!
Cheers
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,809 Posts,
Join Date Aug 2009,
Location Warwickshire, UK
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How did you do the rendering?
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, polycounter,
900 Posts,
Join Date Sep 2009,
Location Austin, Texas
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Totally PRO! I am in love with it.
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, card carrying polycounter,
2,179 Posts,
Join Date Oct 2004,
Location Irvine Ca
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This style is totally fresh, love it!
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,484 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2009,
Location Copenhagen, Denmark
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fantastic stuff, undoz, i am your fan)
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, veteran polycounter,
2,701 Posts,
Join Date Feb 2006,
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Really nice!
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,564 Posts,
Join Date Feb 2009,
Location Brisbane Aus
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outstanding work!
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, null,
13 Posts,
Join Date May 2010,
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Saved to the awesome folder  !
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,469 Posts,
Join Date Mar 2010,
Location Norway
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Quote:
Originally Posted by neosorcerer
maybe this will help

eyes are too wide, iris should be partly covered by eyelid
eyelashes?
eyebrows should be thicker
smaller mouth
i
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I agree , other then that this looks great
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, polygon,
550 Posts,
Join Date Apr 2010,
Location Ontario, Canada
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Idk I kind of like the creep factor. I think it makes it more hilarious. Nice grass stand btw
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, triangle,
281 Posts,
Join Date Apr 2010,
Location Aliso Viejo, CA
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Whoa, thanks a lot for the comments guys! Very very honored to be here.
This is the last version of the model :
Cheers!
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, spline,
125 Posts,
Join Date Aug 2009,
Location Iceland
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The only thing I would say is that I actually thought this was a little girl, not a little boy. I think its probably to do with the shape of the face and as neo pointed out, the eyebrows are too thin. Otherwise its a stellar character... looks on par with Pixar!
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, triangle,
423 Posts,
Join Date Nov 2004,
Location Vancouver, BC
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oh , i thought it was a little girl this whole time. haha. looking great
Serozh Sarkisyan
Environment Artist
Infinity Ward
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, dedicated polycounter,
1,305 Posts,
Join Date Sep 2008,
Location Los Angeles
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Nice Suggestion but Do what you have in your vision.
you done great job.
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, null,
3 Posts,
Join Date Aug 2009,
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