Hey guys,

Here's a new character I'm working on for my portfolio. I still have to rig and pose him for the final shot.

I would appreciate any feedback on this. Thanks!

that's lovely. If I had a single crit, I'd say the arms lack much silhouette. I know he's young but they're quite undifferentiated along their length. Other than that, gorgeous work. And the top view (presuming it's the game mesh) compared to the textures shows your normal maps are working really well- hardly any AO on the cloth, all ocming through in the normals! Great!

~P~

the eyes are scarring me in the black and white shot looks great though!

Very nice!

This is lovely. Very charming work, indeed.

Awesome work, really nice.

The shoes are incredible, in fact the texture as a whole is really impressive.

What did you render the beauty shot with?

extraordinary work, undoz. glad to see that textured!

really nicely modeled and textured! my only concern is he's on the edge of.... unappealing to me. a little scary, in an unappealing way. Maybe the mouth is too big? Also, if he's a guy he needs less manicured eyebrows Really nice though!!

He reminds me of chucky, and growing up I was deathly scared of chucky. So this guy creeps me out... But the texture work is really solid and the dog is cute

Nicely Done Undoz!! I assume you are going to post a clip after your rig implementation and a simple walk cycle of the her, and the dog?

I have no crits about this.
Good work

Lovely design!

Awesome style.

makes me think of AKIRA, but HAPPY!!

I love this character. But please can you rig/ pose him nicely in something dynamic looking?

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

I will see what I can tweak to change his appearance, because I don't want to do bake him again. If it's creeping you out that was not my intention

creationtwentytwo: It was rendered in max's scanline , three lights and ambient.

Nitewalkr: An walk cycle is too much for me maybe some idle animation.

seforin: Yep, that's what I planing to do next.

wow. amazing quality. i wanna see funny short-story anims from this model.

fucking LOVE THIS! keep it up man!

maybe this will help

eyes are too wide, iris should be partly covered by eyelid
eyelashes?
eyebrows should be thicker
smaller mouth
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Yes, that definitely helps! Thanks a lot !

The truth is that I've modeled him with an extreme expression hoping that it will make my life easier on the morphing stage.

Wow yeah, huge difference neosorcerer makes there. I was gonna say he looks a bit creepy/ unappealing but if you fix it like that it'll be perfect.

Hi,

I really love those two!
But I have to say that I was assuming that "he" is a girl.
Perhaps it's the high and thin eyebrows and strong upperlids paired with the small nose.
I know that's caused by his expression, which also makes the rendering more interesting to look at than a dull standard-stare. But perhaps it would be a good idea to try and nail down the basic relaxed look now. Unless you really just want one single rendering in the end. Would be a shame though, if you ask me. Those two have great potential.

I dig it!

I would increase the hand size a bit, but thats a personal choice..

Hey this looks very nice!
Love it

fantastic character. Personally love it as it is

<3