on 01-19-2010 02:47 PM
I like the normal maps on the metal pillar in the front of the building.
Things that would be nice to see:
In the first image (shot taken in the front of the structure) it would be nice to see some foreground element to create a more interesting composition and define the spatial relationship between the viewer and the structure.
The inside of the building looks a bit empty, you probably want to convey a sense of this building having been abandoned for quite some time, but even then it would be nice to see some objects inside that point out towards what the purpose of this place is/was.
The small spotlight/lamps on the top of the structure look too clean compared to the rest of the structure. It would make sense for a couple of them to be broken or fallen. Also the glass should be dusty/cloudy just like the glass in the windows.
Like it has been said before, maybe few pieces of glass in the floor would be nice.
Other than that I think is a good piece of work. Please post the finished product when you are done.