Thanks for the tips, it is rather generic, I'm going for a more disney -ified look to him, very cartoony, also trying to go semi stylized, so I guess I need to push that further. And I never thought about it, but he is lacking some character, something is amiss, will def. go back to the drawing board on making him more memorable. Thanks for that! As far as him looking like the cheerios bee, I can see it, although he was def. not in my mind while designing the character, I tried to take a mayfly and characterize it.
As far as the low poly thing is concerned, its sitting at about 4000 tris right now.. which is about medium poly I guess, I'm mainly aiming to stay under 10,000 so it'll stay easily animateable, plus theres really no reason to be more than that based on his size and shape. I guess thats why I said it was low-er poly.
Thanks guys!! great help and will post updates soon! if anyone else has anything always open to more suggestions, trying to make him great!