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So I remade my portfolio and I was thinking I should collect some c&c before starting to apply for jobs.

I mostly want crits on the site itself and how the work is presented, but if anyone have anything regarding the work itself, don't hesitate to tell.

Opinions regarding what kind of work I should add in the future would also be appreciated.

SITE: http://www.unlitart.com/index.html

Hope you enjoy it!
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Work is a bit sparse, but I like the site. Tell those people at tarsier to get back to metronome
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I like your site. Your content is really strong, you just need more of it. Otherwise great job.
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Great site, great work, good luck with the job search!
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Such sick work,

Actually sent you an e-mail. Shoot me a line when you get it.
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Old (#6)
your dw character turned out nicely...cant believe I missed it

portfolio is pretty straight forward and easy to navigate. works for me!
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nice work dude. Website is a pleasure.
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I like everything about the website except the empty boxes for more content. I realize that you will eventually fill these, but it could be taken as you lack experience or something since you don't have work to fill these spots.
I think it would be better if you just got rid of those for now, and centered your thumbnails at the top. When you get more work to show, put it up there as another box, but don't have empty ones.
Really great work though, and I can easily tell you are talented by the quality of work. The DW4 piece is definitely your best. Good luck!
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Thanks all for your input!

Thanks Brad, I will take the boxes to consideration. Their main purpose was to fill in space and give some expectation pf coming pieces, but might read to the other diretion.
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Fine work, nice and simple presentation, good to go!
Think the empty boxes look okay there, although some splendid content would also suit them
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I agree with everything said. You have a very unique art style that will def. catch peoples eye. Good Luck on the search! I guess the only advise that I would have is to showcase as many art styles as possible. Although your warrior guy is great many employers are also looking for artists who showcase realistic characters. (mass effect,assassins creed,and I could go on) My best advice would be to take an actor or well known person and recreate them while putting your own unique spin on it. Based on the obvious skills you have, this should not be a problem for you because your modeling and texturing skills are def. next gen worthy. Your website is great, I look forward to seeing more work.
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sweet man, < I`m a HUGE fan of that lizard character reminds me of something based off of the ninja turtle universe.
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Hey, I think everyone else more than made the point of more work and empty boxes, I just wanted to compliment you on having nice, large, clear thumbnails. Although the lizard and droid thumbs are a bit vague in what they show.

Good stuff though dude. Look forward to seeing more work up there. ( as do you I'm sure )
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Damn, your characters are fantastic!
I love the texture work you have on the character you did for Dominance Wars.
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