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ignore the hands for the moment, but I have changed everything else, please crit





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Looks really good so far. From the hips down it looks sort of unnatural and really stiff though. The upper leg area looks a tad too small also. Its hard to tell from the shots you took, but perhaps he is off ballanced, like his feet are too far foward and the legs don't sit far back enough in general. The triceps also look a little weird because you have them as two seperate peices, where really the come together and make a horse shoe shape. Keep working on it man, your off to a really good start.
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thanks bradmyers82, Iv done a few changes but haven't touched the legs, however I have taken shots from more angles..

Iv worked on the hand; just need to do the detail on them. Iv changed the triceps and I have moved the groin up



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Legs are a little small. Makes the arms look too long.
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made legs longer

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Much better. Maybe shrink the hands a little too.
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Thanks,

I have shrunk the hands and changed some of the legs and the shoulders

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update

I think I will start the low poly soon... lol

the arms look too long from the back, but look fine from the front =/


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