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Hi all!

this will be my first time to join this kind of event. Will be joining the evil group then.

cheers!

edit:

image update:

final image:


model sheet:


sketch sheet:

Last edited by Jeff MD; 11-09-2008 at 12:16 AM..
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Will be joining the 2D concept painting

here is my initial sketch



cheers!
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expanded my sketch



Initial design of the main tower



initial design of supporting towers



crits and comments welcome!
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I'm loving the feel of it, what your over all concept Idea's.
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many thanks, M_cederstrom!

here is nother update for my main tower sketch, happy with it and will start refining



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Nifty beans! Looking cool so far, to early to crit I think. Will wait for more complete compositions.
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I like the layers of level you have, You going with a alien feel?
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Nice design......^_^
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cody - thanks! agree with you there.
m_cederstrom - thank you too. I still dont know up to now, probably combiation of mechanical with alien feel.
actcathorse- many thanks as well

my original building designs didnt fully fit the perspective I was going with when I was repainting it to the layout. made changes and incorporating some of the desigs I have previously made to some areas.

here are the changes and development so far

step 1



step 2



step 3



step 4



some pieces from the concept broken up to give me visuals



crits and comments welcome!

cheers!

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Just a quick update for me. Added minor details and a splash of colours



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cheers!
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this is starting to get somewhere great work!
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nice work,
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mangled poly and m_ceerstrom - thanks!

some update had few flips and changing directions and revisions.





dont know where Im heade still.

crits and comments welcome!

cheers!
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Old (#14)
this came out looking really awesome
my only critique is that you don't seem to be selling more of the evil side of this concept
i think you had it originally but it ended up getting a little lost when you added your lighting
maybe you can just tilt the view a little to the side to add some of that
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thefirston - many thanks. I agree with you there. thanks for the critique and the view tilt, that is why i need to create a more devilish design in the architecture walls and tweak lighting a bit as well.
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had to do anoter buiding design



and painted it over the image. here is a small update



cits and coments welcome!

cheers!
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another change for me. I felt bored with the composition. things arent working out for me. had to do a relayout.



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cheers!
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yeah new composition is definatly way better - this new foreground stuff really adds depth to the scene. keep it up
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thank you so much for your comment koi. it is greatly appreciated.

have made 2 studies. but I think I will be going with the first one as I might go wrong doing good in the second one.



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another update for me. toss i some colors. I think ill be going with this one and it's the concept ill be going with.



and some more colours




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few more details for me. duplicated the main tower then chopped off some parts and painted tp crated a new one for the supporting towers



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last update for me this weekend.



crits and commetns welcome!

cheers!
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holy hell man this is coming out really awesome
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holy hell man this is coming out really awesome
Again, thank you so much for dropping by and for your kind words.
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another update for me

light post studies



and continued with the image with changes I made



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Cheers!
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