Reminds me of Silent Hill, really nice work.

I think you have a nice set of assets, but to me the major problem with this is a overall lack of focus and shot composition. Make something the focus and keep things like foreground and middle ground in mind. But nice stuff Naree

Reminds me of Silent hill too. I love the shadows on the road, they add a lot to the scene.

Don't add too much stuff, In my opinion the emptiness ads to it.

Cheers!

Thank you for the critique, s0id unfortunately I didn't have enough time to change everything around.
I'll definitely be keeping that in mind for my next project though.

Here is my finals:

I really like this as is, it's very creepy. Excellent work.

Turned out great! Nice job, sir!

Thank you.
I think it's time for some sleep now...

woops... meant to edit last post... ha