I think you have a nice set of assets, but to me the major problem with this is a overall lack of focus and shot composition. Make something the focus and keep things like foreground and middle ground in mind. But nice stuff Naree
Last edited by s0id3; 11-07-2008 at 05:17 PM..
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Thank you for the critique, s0id unfortunately I didn't have enough time to change everything around.
I'll definitely be keeping that in mind for my next project though.
Here is my finals:
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