Re: Scream Park- WIP
on 03-07-2008 08:03 PM
I love evil circus themed games (anyone remember CarnEvil?) [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
You didn't specify if you do or don't want critiques, so I'll just go ahead and give one [img]/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
Right now the clown has a few things that stick out as problem areas. First off, the belt seems incomplete, as their are no holes in it other then the one the buckle resides over, it has no visible end, and theirs also nothing holding it up (the cloth straps belts normally go through).
Another thing that bothers me is the hair. It looks like two wobbly cones sticking out of his head. Maybe it's supposed to look somewhat like that though as it appears to possibly be part of the half-mask the character seems to be wearing. Maybe I'm wrong on that, but it's how i appears to me.
I'm also wondering about the reason for the orange pads on his forearms. Do they serve a purpose? The red dots on his chest and stomach also have me wondering if they're bullet wounds, sense other then some red splattered at the bottom he doesn't seem to be bleeding from them.