I like it. It looks good, very RPG-ish.
- The textures need work. The flesh and the leather are both reading like naked human flesh. Which is good for the arms, bad for the leather. Darken the leather up and give it some leathery texture overlays to bring out look of leather and really sell it as such.
- Her nose is kind of a round bulb that lacks nostirls on the side. Also pretty RPG/Anime women don't have noses or if they are there, its a tiny point.
- The teeth are too white, don't forget the teeth sit inside the mouth which keeps light from reaching the teeth. Also very rarely is tooth color 100% pure white. Even putting a tiny bit of color in there will help.
- She has one tooth instead of teeth. You should paint subtle separations
between the teeth, you don't need to go from top to bottom with a solid black line, just little indents at the top and bottom will help.