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This is a hirez version of a screenshot took from my last work at Centre NAD. I used 3ds max for the modeling, photoshop for the textures and I used combustion for the final compositing.

It's the first time I post my work here so crits & comments are more than welcome.

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gj! now make a normalmap for those bricks, make a lowres and import the whole piece into oblivion [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

crits: the ledges could use some more polys maybe?
and yeh, a bump for those bricks would help i think.
the arches could prolly need more curvature as well me thinks..
I like the stuff going on in the middle there, but it could use more details to make it stand out [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

btw, wires please [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

edit* gah 5.30am spelling sucks ass
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thx for the comments hetsch

as for the bump, there's one already but I agree with you that it's not very visible I'll try to make it more bumpy.

here's a wireframe

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very nice piece. and pretty clean wires.

I would say add the normal map maybe dirty it up a bit more and show it to us again.

This looks really nice though.

What was the final polycount?
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NAD - hahaha

Yeah, I think it looks great. Slick render, I definitely want to make love to your geometry. I am curious as to how a bump of some kind would change the face of this beast...
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love it! looks great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thx for all the good comments
i'd like to work more on it but for the moments im a bit busy now that the school is done i have to find a job, but i will for sure work on it again some time.

as for the polycount JesseMoody its 101035 tris
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show us the whole thing, a screen with whole model. looks very good luck with bumps and or normals/job.
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I'd personally show this off at night time, and push some dramatic lighting on the rosery in the middle.
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Awfully romantic angles, lovely really, but I'm more interested in the details of the arches you put in. Pretty please?

This is very inspiring to me, I think making elaborate structures like cathedrals is probably my most desired... thing in 3D. Besides mecha. I think. I don't know, but I'm going to make a small cathedral-like thing soon, and this has me jazzed. Cheers!
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The lighting looks fantastic imho.
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Lookin' good, give the stones more depth and add some more dirt. One more push to awesomeness, I'd like to see some more angles, it's been 3 days, where's the update, hop to it! [img]/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
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