Re: Dominance War II - Sarah
on 02-11-2007 03:00 AM
welcome to polycount. it's a cool idea. it's a shame you decided against creating a few quick doodles. having some ideas to evolve or mix with one another is very helpful in guaranteeing an aesthetic conception worth spending days modeling and texturing.
it's hard to give any type of helpful comments noting i'm not entirely sure what else you have solidified in your mind. but i think before you get too far along, consider these words in the brief:
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Judging will be based on:
- Popularity of your character. Does your character look cool? Does your character look like he/she/it can easily destroy any form of opposition?
- Regardless which team you are on, it's your job to prove to the judges that your character has what it takes to win this war!
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in your description you define that sarah, "consumes and devours it's prey as a true "shadow"." while creating your shade here, i'd try to define the how in this. i think that's an area that will help flesh out what i think the judges will be looking for when looking over the entries.