Re: somehting to pimp
on 12-06-2004 11:11 PM
i think the white dot needs to move up quicker, and have that same bob the ship thing has afterward. The transition from the blob to full white is kind of slow, making the whole transition seem kind of boring.
You may want to leave the hand written segment up longer, i didnt know what it was and all i could see then was some photoshop filter. Its a cool effect, i think just needs more pop and punch to make it exciting rather than "oook, another demo reel..."
maybe play with how the button links transition in as well, they just seem to appear by fading, you could liven them up with a little motion, and sync it to some music for extra kick. The motion on the ship adds a ton of life to it, a little more motion in the other elements could really make it pop.
this is a cool idea, good luck to ya, just need to make it more exciting. [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]