RazorBladder: I see what you're saying about the jaw and the eyes. For the jaw I was going for something similar to an alligator, having the long mouth and such. I can move some verts around and sorta make a tongue that's lying on the bottom of the mouth, which might make it less boat like. Not sure what to do about the eyes though, it may just be a shading thing since the back eyes are set out a little from the front eyes which may be causing a slight shadow making them look separate. Any ideas on what would make them look less like a mask on his nose?
FatAssasin: I went through and took out quite a few polys, it's down to 5268 right now. So over 1000 polys were lost. I'm thinking about adding a bit to the wings, right now they're just tubes. I've been trying to find some good pictures of bat wings to use as a reference, but google hasn't been turning up much. I may end up just add some segments to add some more shape to them.
poopinmymouth: happy B-day! What do you mean by more dynamic anatomy? The wings are going out at an angle so I don't think the front, back, and side shots give a good impression of the size of the wings, but I've made them larger and pulled them away from the body a little more to give him a larger wingspan.
AdamBrome: yea, I took out a bunch from his head and legs.
So here's some updated shots:
Like I said, the poly count is down to 5268. I redid the arms, didn't like how they looked before, and I'm still not liking the forearms but I'm not sure yet what to do with those. I think that the legs need some work or to be completely redone like the arms, need to figure out what to do with them. Any suggestions?