Cyborg girl character

Amaury · Jan 2015

LATEST UPDATE :

EDIT : remaking it from scratch

Stirls · Jan 2015

Inspired by the Strogg at all? Lookin good.

Amaury · Jan 2015

Yea, first I had the mass effect zombies as reference, and then someone suggested me to google the stroggs. Since it was the exact feeling that I was trying to get on her, I followed this direction.

Amaury · Mar 2015

TheodorUrhed · Mar 2015

Her shoulders and chest should be wider, her hips are also very low, look up a skeleton and it should make sense to you where and why that bump is created.

Otherwise it's looking pretty good, keep it up

Amaury · Mar 2015

Thanks for your feedback ! I'll fix those things ASAP.
Then I'll paint on top of the sculpt in photoshop to define once and for all where the mechanical parts should go and where I'll put details and areas of rest.

Amaury · May 2015

Took a fresh look at it, I almost redid everything.

LRoy · May 2015

Lookin cool. I think the head might be a tad big.

Amaury · May 2015

quick transpose

Amaury · Jun 2015

still in the look dev phase but I'm making progress

Tectonic · Jun 2015

those fabric folds look great!

Amaury · Jun 2015

more look dev on the coat

praetor187 · Jun 2015

Looking really badass man love the cloth designs your going with!

Amaury · Aug 2015

I left it unfinished for a long time, and now I don't like it anymore so... Figured out it would be better to remake everything, again.

Magihat · Aug 2015

The new face is certainly more appealing. Great job! I did like the design of the clothes though, are you going for the same style or are you remaking those as well?

Amaury · Aug 2015

same spirit, but probably shorter sleeves, and without hood
I'm going for a techninja kind-of look, inspired by fashion such as this
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the only thing I don't know is if I include glowing elements (fck yea emissive maps) and if I keep the stylized hair or make more realistic alpha planes

sort of mirror's edge x deus ex

Abrvpt · Aug 2015

Hey ! New face is much better indeed.

I also have a character that I redid twice and never finished... and just like you I plan to reboot him again.
This coat looks great, are you going to use Marvelous Designer ?

Amaury · Aug 2015

hmm don't know yet, I experiment a lot, that's probably why I never finish stuff
I like the quick results of Marvelous but it's hard to control the look of the folds

plus, there's a dilemma : i want to make the coat longer because it looks cool, but it will hide the mech details :c

TomGT · Aug 2015

Her new tech-ninja design feels quite solid! Keep it up man.

Amaury · Aug 2015

nailed down the basic proportions

MrHobo · Aug 2015

I think you might want to double check the head size, it might be just a little big right now. Everything else reads very nicely though, it will be interesting to see how the tech ninja design comes together.

Amaury · Aug 2015

I just checked the size of the head, the body = 7x head, so yea there's a mistake
but I'll try to change the proportions of some body parts like shoulder width, torso length, otherwise some features would seem oversized if I just scale the head

Eoq · Aug 2015

I agree with that resize, looks a bit more realistic that way

Keep at it dawg!

Amaury · Aug 2015

I haven't touched the head (yet)
btw, do you guys have a trick for merging the head with the body without having to put 20M polys in the whole model just to make the skin pores on the face ? if you know what I mean

Cyborg girl character

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