Cartoon girl - Animschool assignment

Jean-Pascal · Sep 2014

Hey guys! I recently finished this character for my modeling class at animschool, and I wanted to share it with you. I hope you'll like it!

Valkarai · Sep 2014

This looks really good, the only criticism I have is the skirt around is too tight around the butt. I like how the bottom of the skirt flows and I feel as though the top of the skirt should have the same flow to it.

Other than that great job!

DWalker · Sep 2014

Her legs seem a bit thick when compared to her arms - or perhaps her arms are a bit thin when compared to her legs... The knee/upper calf seems to be the main culprit.

Her upper thighs look a bit too long, but it is hard to be certain given the skirt

katana · Sep 2014

cute character.

ZippZopp · Sep 2014

nice work, great execution on the model, the face looks great and I know it isn't easy to make a character look pleasing in this style.

it is a little hard to tell from the full body view, but it looks like you have a lot of topology converging at the base of the neck, there might be a better way to run those edges

erroldynamic · Sep 2014

Very cute! I like the black and white presentation. I think a simple grey background might look nicer.

lotet · Sep 2014

so pretty! reminds me of the paper airplane short Disney did!

Jean-Pascal · Oct 2014

Thank you everyone, I'll definitly keep all your constructive criticisms in mind as I work on my next model!

pmiller001 · Oct 2014

Yeah man, this style, not so easy to pull off and make look as good as you did. Bravo!
I will say her arms don tmatch her legs. So next time just keep that in mind.
Looking forward to more Jean-Pascal !

Cartoon girl - Animschool assignment

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