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Warhammer's Melta Gun

Damian Nachman
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Hard surface for the hard surface god!
This is my go at my all time favorite Melta-Gun, from the 40K Universe.
The High Poly is more or less done. I'll work a little bit more on the detailing, before I move on to retopo.
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I'm trying to come up with ideas for the details on the top of the gun, but nothing comes to mind.
Any tips or suggestions would be incredibly helpful.

Update:
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  • Xazas
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    Xazas polycounter lvl 7
    Nice work! For a moment the shade of grey made me think that is actually a photo of a real plastic bit. It is very accurate to the original and you put some good details in as well.
    The only things that look a bit of for me are the big grooves in the middle. They seem to be irregular in thickness. And the space next to it looks a bit empty for now and could use some detail.

    As it is a close range weapon something like a scope on top would be illogical. I would stick to the oversized iron sights. If this is supposed to be a meltagun to be used by a "normal" human instead of a Space Marine you could put an aditional handle on top for firing it from the hip likeMGs have for carrying them around.
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  • Damian Nachman
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    Damian Nachman polycounter lvl 6
    Xazas wrote: »
    Nice work! For a moment the shade of grey made me think that is actually a photo of a real plastic bit. It is very accurate to the original and you put some good details in as well.
    The only things that look a bit of for me are the big grooves in the middle. They seem to be irregular in thickness. And the space next to it looks a bit empty for now and could use some detail.

    As it is a close range weapon something like a scope on top would be illogical. I would stick to the oversized iron sights. If this is supposed to be a meltagun to be used by a "normal" human instead of a Space Marine you could put an aditional handle on top for firing it from the hip likeMGs have for carrying them around.


    Thanks for the awesome feedback!
    I tried fiddiling around with some "scope" ideas, but eventually stuck with the iron sights. As you said, it makes the most sense.

    I really like the idea of adding a "human" handle. I was making this model with Adeptus Mechanicus in mind( That's why I created the "Mechanicus Aquila" insignia), but modelling a separate handle would be cool.

    The whole process got me deep into 40k lore, So I might as well satisfy the Hard Surface gods with a whole cabinet of Warhammer weps. But first, retopo'ing and texturing this bad boy!
    I think I'll PBR it.
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  • Nistrum
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    nice work man. yeah 40k is like a virus. once you get it into your system you tend to go a little nuts.... the idea of building a companyt of marines is kicking about in my head. im just glad i STARTED with the dread rather than having all that work looming in my future.. :P
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  • Ribtibs
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    Ribtibs
    Love me some warhammer 40k art. I think the gun needs surface damage. The grim dark future is grim dark. A lot of the weapons in 40k get reused a lot since the adeptus mechanicus can't mass produce some of these things. Just throw on a purity seal or two, and rough up those edges with the planar brush in ZB. :D
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  • Damian Nachman
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    Damian Nachman polycounter lvl 6
    I decided to revisit this project, after learning some PBR.
    Final textured low poly:
    ibeMYF3UJMIpB.png
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  • astiil
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    astiil polycounter lvl 6
    http://screencast.com/t/sjGoAMxc Does not much small grip?
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  • axxic3
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    axxic3
    I would give a little life to the scroll object on the side, letting it flow more like paper or cloth along the side of the gun. Wax stamp looks awesome with reflections.
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  • Valandar
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    Valandar polycounter lvl 18
    astiil wrote: »
    http://screencast.com/t/sjGoAMxc Does not much small grip?

    Nope, the grip's the right size. It's a HUGE weapon, like most Warhammer 40k guns. In real life, it'd have to be tripod mounted, but 40k characters run around waving things like that one-handed.
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  • ghaztehschmexeh
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    ghaztehschmexeh
    I would work on the texture some more. At the moment it's just reading as a flat blue colour with some grey painted on the edges. The metal isn't reading well either. I'd go back and work on your material definition.
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  • Legion_studios
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    nice gun when i see a war hammer 40 item i all way's think of this video :P

    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DXkSM7F_bac"]Boreale is Planning - YouTube[/ame]
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  • Damian Nachman
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    Damian Nachman polycounter lvl 6
    Thanks for the great feedback, battle brothers!
    Currently re-texturing the thing, and redoing the purity seal.
    I'll also get Marmoset Toolbag for a proper render, since I've noticed how noisy
    Substance Desinger's renders are.
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  • Damian Nachman
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    Damian Nachman polycounter lvl 6
    Here's what I got so far:
    i05XEK23Mziij.png
    i8EMvYmF4jPXk.png
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