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Student show reel - Cyborg Girl

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Hi Guys,

This is my first character model for my showreel. Based on Antony Wards tutorial on Digital Tutors. Please let me know what you guys think. She's just under 2000 polys.


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  • nameet
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    nameet
    doesn't anyone have any comments? Any comment(positive or negative) would be appreciated... or am I going about the whole thing incorrectly?
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  • NickT3D
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    NickT3D
    The body for the most part is good. But only good.

    I dont want to tear it apart completely but the face needs a lot of work. Post some wireframs shots and i can give you more of a breakdown.. The proportions need work as well. her waist is extremely tiny. A lot of things need some more dfinition as well.

    Yeah wireframe shots and ill give you some more feedback
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  • Jason Young
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    Jason Young polycounter lvl 14
    I recommend not putting a tutorial piece in your showreel/portfolio. You run the risk of having something that many other people have in their portfolio, and it doesn't prove that you can work off a concept or reference. Plus, it draws immediate comparison to the tutorial version and you don't want to present work when a better version of the exact same thing already exists.
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