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Update of where i am at now.


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hey dudes i started on this project this past weekend and i am going for a pretty generic sci fi character. my concept is from a book cover for star wars.

C&C very welcome! i am trying to bust this character out pretty quick to get back to my class i am also working on. ugh so much work recently!

concept - http://cghub.com/images/view/176025/



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i got a nice sculpt over from my lead - Bobo the seal. LOL!


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well it was missing that little extra wow factor. Now it has it!

HAHA looking good Brian!

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This is amazing lol
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small update of where i got over the weekend. diden't get too far

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The second one was really disturbing. You better remove that if you want more people to keep looking at your thread.
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^I'd say the opposite.

Shoulder pads seem less beefy in the concept.
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The second one was really disturbing. You better remove that if you want more people to keep looking at your thread.
Penis's increase views here at polycount, everyone knows that


Looking forward to this, sick base so far and love the concept

I think I agree the shoulder pads seem a bit more slender in the concept, not sure if you're stylizing it up a bit tho.
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@DireWolf - lol sorry i didn't mean to offend anyone, I just thought it was funny. it just seems like a regular thing on polycount to have penis's on everything. haha.

thx for the feedback dudes! i will defiantly bulk up the shoulder armor.

I am trying to keep fairly close to the concept...especially the colors. But I am not necessarily going 100% accurate. i have been looking at a bunch of mass effect armor to see if i can get any cool shapes out of that too.

anyways, did a little work at lunch.

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OOoo slowly but surely man.I still think that forehead is kinda tall.I bet if you took a break from League of Legends for a week this would be more than done.

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The waist/legs look to thick to me, but its a great start!
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here is an update of where i am at so far! feels like it is going so slow but its getting there!

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did a little work at lunch today. added a few small details and worked on the legs / shoes.

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The second one was really disturbing. You better remove that if you want more people to keep looking at your thread.
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reminds me a little of a judge uniform (from judge dredd , remember?) i don't think the high heels go along with the "military" and armored look of the uniform (just my opinion)
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she looks tight
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@ Aga 22 - i was trying to give her just a feminine boot. i totaly agree it shouldent be high heels. ill try and make it look more of a functional boot for her. thx for the feedback!

@ Pancakes - thanks!

here is another update. i am going to try to do a bunch of work this weekend! i will finish this! haha

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FROM DA GRAVE!

I like.Glad your bringing her back.I must say though, the shell on dem boots is out of control.Push that thickness in a bit and your good to go.
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getting close!

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Looks like the seat of her pants has built-in cheek pockets. :P

Maybe stretch the fabric across instead? Also looks like her second belt is defying gravity... Other than that, looks good!
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I really wanted to texture this past weekend so i started on her face. Here is where I am at.


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My only feedback is that the backside of her buttocks/legs could very well be naked, same with her knees, as there is no kind of indication of material and that the material right now seem to unnaturally fit every cavity there is.

I think you did very well with the rest though. The face is going to look even better when you get some accompanying hair (if you're going to).
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Just seeing that thread for the first time. The head looks nice.

I agree with Denny, it's like she doesn't wear pant but you painted directly the body sculpt with the pants color...

Also, the feet are strange, the shape is not natural. I found a photo close to the boots you did :



Check the shape of the sole, especially where the foot should hit the ground, under the toes...

I suggest to add some military badge on her chest too, you know like in Startrek ^^.
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I agree with what Denny and Texelion had to say- it may look fine when you're further along, but it's not a bad idea to try out some kind of way to break up the materials. Maybe do some kind of hexagon texture? XD seems like a lot of sci-fi things do that. But yeah, I'm sure once you start messing with spec/ possibly overlays, it could really help with that.
Also, something I'm not sure if anyone else has mentioned... but how is that second belt attached? It's just kind of awkwardly floating there. Did you ditch it in your lowpoly?
Looking forward to seeing what you do with the hair And great progress so far dude!
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