Just a Canon

aferalva6 · Apr 2014

Hi.

I think I've finished but I would appreciated your suggestions and recommendations.
It was made on Mudbox and I want to be sure that everything is fine before do any retopology.

shadacer · Apr 2014

Looks OK, though I do see a bit of texture stretch near the base of the barrel. Also, I think the wood texture normals have been projected over the bolt on tghe middle of the wheel, so you may need to fix that. Overall shape is good, though the texture could use a bit more love IMO.

RobeOmega · Apr 2014

Can we see the maps?

aferalva6 · Apr 2014

Thank you for sharing your comments. I will fix the wood texture because it is projected on the bolt.although I can not see where you said the texture is stretch.
Maps I will post very soon
Cheers

Dimfist · Apr 2014

Aferalva6, what look/style are you going for? The stretching is right near where the powder would be lit. It looks like a few rings of uvs are bunched together.

David3D.The · Apr 2014

Here's some examples of where there is stretching, the distance apart on your UV map in these areas is probably slightly too big for the amount of UV space, try dragging them closer until it looks a little less stretched.

GrungyStudios · Apr 2014

Some of the textures look a bit noisy. Might want to reduce the normals on some spots. And as other users have said above, there is indeed some uv stretching issues going on. But its a good piece.

aferalva6 · Apr 2014

Thanks everyone for your comments very useful. I have made some changes with my uvs.
Dimfist : Not sure about the style I saw this canon in Croatia I took a picture of it and decide to made a model.

aferalva6 · Apr 2014

I think that is it, I will start with the retopology

Joost · Apr 2014

The wood seems very saturated for an old cannon. And the edges could use some wear&tear. I'd add some dirt to the texture as well.

Also consider the age of your cannon. The one you saw is probably very old and has spent many years exposed to the elements. A newer cannon will have shinier, smoother metal. If you're going for an old cannon I'd give it some more rust.
reference: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/41/Cannon_near_old_akko_israel.jpg
http://image.yaymicro.com/rz_1210x1210/0/5f1/old-cannon-5f15a2.jpg this one has some nice fading on the edges of the wood.

aferalva6 · Apr 2014

komaokc wrote: »

The wood seems very saturated for an old cannon. And the edges could use some wear&tear. I'd add some dirt to the texture as well.

Also consider the age of your cannon. The one you saw is probably very old and has spent many years exposed to the elements. A newer cannon will have shinier, smoother metal. If you're going for an old cannon I'd give it some more rust.
reference: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/41/Cannon_near_old_akko_israel.jpg
http://image.yaymicro.com/rz_1210x1210/0/5f1/old-cannon-5f15a2.jpg this one has some nice fading on the edges of the wood.

Thank you for your comments and the time to put some references.
I will make sure to go back and try your recommendations.

Just a Canon

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