I think this looks great! I love her design, I wish this was already a skin so I could make it for the character section XD
Only thing i have to say atm is that most of the splash art for League has the character on screen right with the character looking forward or towards screen left. Its because the UI for skin purchase is on the left side. You might want to consider this.
@skyerzz : Oh... it's true ! Thank you so much ! I'm going to correct my composition to adapt it to the UI of League Of legends ! This contest is a big challenge for me
@modelpink : Thank's ! Yes, it's already plan ! I'm going to add many effects such as Blizzard or Snow etc... ! At this moment, I'm focus on the character and then I will make the background ^.^
Hi there and lovely sketches so far.
I like the idea and design. The armplates could use some more detail or "weight" to them. They feel a little thin and even right now.
Things I'd like to see more work on are:
-you could widen the format a bit, so she has more space to the right side and moves out of the center.
-I'd like to see the fur not covering half of her kneecaps. Either cover it completely or not at all(fur below the kneecap)
-And there are lots of unfavorable tangents and contact points in your picture...gimme a moment...
I marked critical points on the attachement image.
Circles show points of tangents or almost touching etc.
It's always preferrable to have clear overlapping or none at all.
Lines are parallels, which are not nice as well.
Looking much better already although you somehow managed to put in other points like the ones you just removed. I mean the claw on the right that just barely touches the rock, same for the ends of the pigtails.
Keep it up, this looks so promising.
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here's my progress !
Only thing i have to say atm is that most of the splash art for League has the character on screen right with the character looking forward or towards screen left. Its because the UI for skin purchase is on the left side. You might want to consider this.
@Deadlyboar: thank's
i definitely want that skin to be official
The next step, I'm going to make the background & effects !
I like the idea and design. The armplates could use some more detail or "weight" to them. They feel a little thin and even right now.
Things I'd like to see more work on are:
-you could widen the format a bit, so she has more space to the right side and moves out of the center.
-I'd like to see the fur not covering half of her kneecaps. Either cover it completely or not at all(fur below the kneecap)
-And there are lots of unfavorable tangents and contact points in your picture...gimme a moment...
I marked critical points on the attachement image.
Circles show points of tangents or almost touching etc.
It's always preferrable to have clear overlapping or none at all.
Lines are parallels, which are not nice as well.
Next step, the environnement !
You rock !
Keep it up, this looks so promising.
@Silvarspark: Yes, I also see them and I'm going to correct when I will make the environement. I didn't forget your feedbacks !
With the effects ! I'm going to correct many details and the color ambiance ! :thumbup: