Tree_House_Composition_4_(WIP)

editable_poly · Jan 2015

I am trying to achieve a triangular composition so that the eye loops around the diorama. Preferably I would like to have a triangular composition at most sides that the viewer could look at the diorama from. I don't want the eye to stop at one of the zipline islands. The tree house is the main focus. What do you find your eye doing? Any comments help.

Meloncov · Jan 2015

Ooh, this is looking cool. Looking forward to seeing it with textures.

editable_poly · Jan 2015

thanks

editable_poly · Feb 2015

I don't know how to get the BBM codes to link to my imgur images. So here is the link to the imgur http://imgur.com/a/bYAPe#zN1TsXy.

editable_poly · Aug 2015

Check out the final version on Vimeo:

https://vimeo.com/135045588

foreverlost · Aug 2015

I think the layout and overall design is a knockout.

IMO You could still give this a real push into a final pass territory by using more color variation, saturation, and highlights in your material. It seems like it wants to be more handpainted but doesn't have the color detail that would be involved there. Warmer, more colorful lighting and lighter shadows would also lend itself well.

Jonas Ronnegard · Aug 2015

Hi I really like the tree house idea and the design is nice,

one thing I might change myself is that I would make the staircase more natural, atleast the top rounded staircase feels a bit too perfect.

Tree_House_Composition_4_(WIP)

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