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Hey guys. Just starting my sketchbook. Sounds like a cool idea. LOOKING FOR CRITIQUES ON ALL WORK! Going to start this off with my first ever artwork posted on this forum. Just a picture with a 3D render.


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Not...shiny.. enough!!!
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Not...shiny.. enough!!!
Sorry man T_T MORE SHINE!!

Will this make up for it?

This is my first model and I wanted to show you all. Looking for feedback. Thanks.

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The shader you're using seems a tad... matte. Crank up the specular intensity and sharpness, and dont forget to use a spec map. And it might do you good to harden the edge loops around the edge of the metal base to get the same looking kind of bevel. Aside from that, wireframe shots are always useful for feedback...
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It certainly looks damaged and used, which helps with showing it's age. I agree with the matte-ness (mattiness)?
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