Hey
I did revamp the Vengeful Spirit weapon a bit. Hawk skulls look weird.
I would love any kind of feedback, for all the concepts I posted so far! It's been very quiet here.
wishing all of you a nice weekend! Don't get lost in the TI4 hype
venge weapon i could definitely see ingame, but the other venge items feel a bit flimsy and without anything really striking- the bird skull would be a good main theme for the set so id probably extrapolate from there!
Hi, I am a beginner 3D modeler. I've already made two swords, but I do not have enough imagination to make a good concept. I want collaborate with you. You can start to give me a single thing. If all want, then you can proceed to the Setu. All my item here
Thanks all for the feedback ! @Pastat7: it's hawk skull. at least that's what google showed me
@Pipotchi: thanks, that's definitely a critique I can work with - and I agree, I did the second set in very short time, it definitely needs some work now when I look at it.
@Moffee: I saw your work on the Juggersword, really nice! Would be nice working together. Do you want to pick something from my thread? The set with the hawk-skull weapon is now already taken. Or should I do a new concept for a hero of your choice?
I'm pretty sure this could count as a completely new set.. only the wings are somwhat similar.
I went with the skull theme, thinking that Shendel would probably grow a bit of a hatred for flying things being robbed of her wings herself. and now she's just angry all the time and wears the bones of birds to tell everybody she means business.
Oh man, I'm loving almost everything in this thread!
In terms of inspiration, I think the whole idea of VS having imagery of dead birds on her set is pretty great. Fits solidly with both her lore and general theme.
That being said, I don't think I'm 100% convinced on the wings on this set concept. Maybe you could try and push the boundaries a bit more and really make great use of your dead bird idea and inspire your wings with the shape/incorporation of skeletal bird wings, or normal bird wings for that matter.
Also, just personal preference but I think it'd be really interesting if you did something like the visor/helmet(?) in your earlier VS concept, but make it more thematically linked with the bird idea.
Other than that, all i can suggest is maybe a more engaging belt piece, but that's just me scrounging for things to comment on.
Really love the set, it's nice, simple and elegant. great stuff!
@ SCATT: Thanks! very good critique, agree completely
So, here's another one with wings and some minor changes! I really should be learning for uni but this is so much more fun. Becaue I have not heard anything from the guy who wanted to take this concept in months I decided to make it available again!
I love it! Really gives off that image of a bird with their wings clipped and really distinguishes your set from the pre-existing ones. It's not the most lavish VS set, but I think that might be why i like it so much. The ribbons where her feathers once were is a really clever touch.
well, it seems I am only fully creative when I should be doing other stuff. but well.. Here's a TB weapon I made (monthly competition and so).
Idea behind is that TB made this weapon out of other demons he defeated in his time in foulfell.
Feedback appreciated!
thanks everyone! great feedback.
agito666 is probably right, in my original version the lineflow is completely interrupted.
I've been doodling some disruptor concepts today, might even tryout a mount even though I am terrible with creatures
Feedback appreciated! tell me what sucks
Also I decided to make this two concepts available again, since I have not heard from the people who wanted to sculpt it in months and they also did not reply to my messages.
The back and leg pieces are my favorite! Great work Todestomate! I'd prefer a bigger silhouette for her shoulders to balance off her tight corset and skirt.
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I did revamp the Vengeful Spirit weapon a bit. Hawk skulls look weird.
I would love any kind of feedback, for all the concepts I posted so far! It's been very quiet here.
wishing all of you a nice weekend! Don't get lost in the TI4 hype
@Pastat7: it's hawk skull. at least that's what google showed me
@Pipotchi: thanks, that's definitely a critique I can work with - and I agree, I did the second set in very short time, it definitely needs some work now when I look at it.
@Moffee: I saw your work on the Juggersword, really nice! Would be nice working together. Do you want to pick something from my thread? The set with the hawk-skull weapon is now already taken. Or should I do a new concept for a hero of your choice?
I went with the skull theme, thinking that Shendel would probably grow a bit of a hatred for flying things being robbed of her wings herself. and now she's just angry all the time and wears the bones of birds to tell everybody she means business.
Feeback would be great!
In terms of inspiration, I think the whole idea of VS having imagery of dead birds on her set is pretty great. Fits solidly with both her lore and general theme.
That being said, I don't think I'm 100% convinced on the wings on this set concept. Maybe you could try and push the boundaries a bit more and really make great use of your dead bird idea and inspire your wings with the shape/incorporation of skeletal bird wings, or normal bird wings for that matter.
Also, just personal preference but I think it'd be really interesting if you did something like the visor/helmet(?) in your earlier VS concept, but make it more thematically linked with the bird idea.
Other than that, all i can suggest is maybe a more engaging belt piece, but that's just me scrounging for things to comment on.
Really love the set, it's nice, simple and elegant. great stuff!
So, here's another one with wings and some minor changes! I really should be learning for uni but this is so much more fun.
Becaue I have not heard anything from the guy who wanted to take this concept in months I decided to make it available again!
Take it while its fresh!
Keep it up!
well, it seems I am only fully creative when I should be doing other stuff. but well.. Here's a TB weapon I made (monthly competition and so).
Idea behind is that TB made this weapon out of other demons he defeated in his time in foulfell.
Feedback appreciated!
Dazzle
feedback giffen.
i like that but somehow it is "too wide spread" for me... i would cut down the "branches" that extend too much XD
make it more like a "shield"
ya it really depends on people :P
i just prefer bottom the over extend one shorten a little hehe.
something like this
http://imgur.com/pENRX9a
in same time it reminds me Don Don's DK shield.
agito666 is probably right, in my original version the lineflow is completely interrupted.
I've been doodling some disruptor concepts today, might even tryout a mount even though I am terrible with creatures
Feedback appreciated! tell me what sucks
I did a touch-up on the Naga weapon: