Something's bugging me about the thighs, but I can't nail it down. Maybe the character's right knee is too low? Not low enough? Trying to imagine the skeleton underneath. Maybe just that the foot is cut off.
Lighting and coloring is great, skin tone especially. Life vest material feels a bit rushed compared to the fine brushwork on everything else.
@Eric Chadwick thanks! i agree about the leg, i edited my last post. not sure what to do about the vest, really havent had a clear idea of the material, just thought about some generic syntethic material. i also think the shapes of the pillows should be more uniform. anyway thanks for the feedback!
Something feels off about his right arm. Maybe the upper arm needs to be shorter? More foreshortening? Maybe the forearm cloth needs to be wrinkled/bunched more, just below the elbow? Or could it just be the values from elbow to wrist are too uniform, making it look very flat?
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EDIT: change the right knee ever so slightly. not sure its noticable but i prefer how it looks
Something's bugging me about the thighs, but I can't nail it down. Maybe the character's right knee is too low? Not low enough? Trying to imagine the skeleton underneath. Maybe just that the foot is cut off.
Lighting and coloring is great, skin tone especially. Life vest material feels a bit rushed compared to the fine brushwork on everything else.
Something feels off about his right arm. Maybe the upper arm needs to be shorter? More foreshortening? Maybe the forearm cloth needs to be wrinkled/bunched more, just below the elbow? Or could it just be the values from elbow to wrist are too uniform, making it look very flat?