Hey giles! I think your model looks great and I really dig the pose, soo good job!
I think if I had to critique though it would be the UV shell for her face. Her UV shell for the most important part of the model has been compressed to about 10% of the shell while the rest has been so relaxed out it takes a larger portion and most of it is covered by hair anyways! I figure you are probably calling this one done, but when you decide to do another character give alot more space to the face so that you can add even more detail.