I agree with almighty, I'm sure you could find a dynamic pose which doesn't hide her face. Maybe you should not submit a front view for your main beauty shot. I mean, the pose is dynamic EXCEPT in the front view imo. The sheet with the three other angles is far better, but the gradient between each pedestal sucks. There is no limit to how many images we submit ( it's AT LEAST 3 images, you can have more ), so I suggest that you separate the second sheet in three, forget the front view and make a 3 beauty separated beauty shots.
Or you can make 2 beauty shots, one with front/back view and one with the side views. Or you could also make 2 poses, one like your concept, where she is "peaceful" but also "haughty", and one where she demostrate her combat rage...
Anyway, it's a good character, nice work.