Wow dunno how I missed this, glad you sent the PM.
Lookin solid so far, I'm surprised you didn't change much of the armor. Especially around the knee area cause I pretty much bs'd those shapes LOL
Main thing that sticks out to me isthat I think you overdid the mask, especially around the neck area
I'd planned for the mask to be pretty flat in the front and I didn't really solve much of the neck originally because it's mostly going to be in shadow but I imagined it would be basically a cloth wrap going around the neck/head in the areas the mask didn't cover. Sort of like a ninja mask. The artifacts around the neck in the original concept are from when I resized the mask and missed some cleanup, there's no armor there.
This is more how I had imagined it:
I think the hood could stick out a little more also but you're free to change whatever.