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Hey guys,
So I'm a relatively new member here and I wanted to get some opinions on this project I've been working on. I am loosely modeling the ship from the anime series "Outlaw Star" (It's oldish.) I've gotten up to a point were i'm making minor adjustments and I thought community input would help move this project in a good way. Critique me to bits!
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Here we go attached are the progressive picture of the project. I don't know how they insert them into the actual reply? imageshack or sumthing?
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Well post up images of your ship and im sure people would love to critique it.
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More Progression Pics. The final batch in the next post.
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Alrighty,
So this is were i'm at. Sry for all the attachments I'll figure out the whole inserting image thing in a bit. These last attached images are were i'm up to. Tidbit of info, this was all done in 3Ds max, I will be bringing it into Zbrush to add some details and such. After that its texturing so gimme some stuff to fix before I move any further into this!
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It's a good effort, but I don't think you've captured the ship's form very well. In particular, the terraced part you added detracts from the sleek/bubbly feel of the source pic.
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Nice. I have a folder titled "XGP15A-2" in my "to model" directory. I think it's a good start. Like throttlekitty said, I think they are some area that detract a little from the overall likeness of the model, but other than that I think it's pretty good and recognizable. Keep going.
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