Kriss Vector SMG

[Vio]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/myweapon.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/KrissProgress3.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/KrissProgress2.jpg

This is just a sculpt test for an SMG I'm making for a soldier character. I started it as a high poly in max but I just wanted to see if I could do some extra details in zbrush with the kind of raised screws and so on and of course use some poly paint tests.

I used pimpmygun.com to come up with the customisation for this. I love the look of the Kriss Vector on its own but I really wanted a kind of longer rifled weapon for my character without doing the typical M4.

[SPYFF]

Some of parts good, but some of parts is not good. The highpoly side rails is not looks real. The texture of lowpoly is a bit too dark, please use some viewport shader (Xoliul Shader 2) and AO based texture (if this texture is AO based, i say nothing). Finally, your Pimpmygun reference is beautiful, but learn some hard surface texturing in future. This is my critic, no offense!

[Vio]

Some of parts good, but some of parts is not good. The highpoly side rails is not looks real. The texture of lowpoly is a bit too dark, please use some viewport shader (Xoliul Shader 2) and AO based texture (if this texture is AO based, i say nothing). Finally, your Pimpmygun reference is beautiful, but learn some hard surface texturing in future. This is my critic, no offense!

Cheers SPYFF I wasn't sure about the shaders.

[Vio]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/KrissProgress4.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/KrissProgress5.jpg

Ok I redid the side rails but also made some big changes on the stock, that part was very wrong before having seen a better set of references.

[amile duan]

Yeah,I also think it will better if you add some great textures on.The gun seems just simple at this stage.

[SPYFF]

Vio, you going right ;) Looks much better!

[Vio]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/KrissProgress7.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/silversynth/KrissProgress6.jpg

[Vio]

more scratches, tone changes?

[Olli.]

eotech looks way out of proportion.. unless you're going for a stylized cartoony feel.

[Vio]

Not cartoon of course but I wanted a type of holosight that's custom built, hasn't been seen before like this kind of hand guard on a Kriss. As long as it was slightly wider than the top rail and kept the hight.

[Amsterdam Hilton Hotel]

right now it looks a lot like a misproportioned Eotech because many of the forms are similar. you may want to either make it more accurate to an Eotech or else make the design more clearly unique

[Donavonyoung]

Take a look at these weapons, then compare them to your SMG. I think you texturing is leaving a lot to be desired but this may be able to guide you a bit more. http://www.lonewolf3d.com/

[Vio]

Take a look at these weapons, then compare them to your SMG. I think you texturing is leaving a lot to be desired but this may be able to guide you a bit more. http://www.lonewolf3d.com/

Yeah there is room for improvement on the texture but the texture sizes in that portfolio look a bit expensive given the limitations in my brief. I will probably have to come back to this project after hand ins to get that level of detail sorted, time is running out.