Sketchbook: Loginus

[Loginus]

Hi everyone,

I'm posting a few thing I made over last few months, feel free to criticize and express how much you dislike it :). I will appreciate every constructive comment.

http://i52.tinypic.com/116qjw4.jpg

http://i51.tinypic.com/1ota4x.jpg

http://i51.tinypic.com/2cok0g3.jpg

http://i54.tinypic.com/2lngtig.jpg

[AsherOS]

Nice work! for the four armed guy, I think you should blend the musculature of the arms into the body more, because it looks like they were just slapped onto the torso.

[Gail_Blitzy]

agreeded
you need to define the deltoid and pectoral muscles like you have for the top set!
I like your line drawing too, some nice detailing in there

[Sleepythylacine]

For the 4 armed guy, id also lengthen his torso a bit just so it doesn't look like his second arms are coming out of the lower part of the rib cage. and i personally would make him have 4 pecs. but i seen people just make his pec muscles bigger. just play around with the muscle structure.

[Hammed Al-Tamimi]

Hello! Nice start! If I were you, I would increase the texture resolution (if possible) on the book. You might also want to check the scaling of the barrels in the scene, they seem slightly small, but it may just be the camera angle. I like the texturing you did on the scene itself.