low poly desk

[demilich]

Hello polycount, this is my first attempt at creating an environment object for a game. Feedback and critiques are welcome. I want to improve my skills in this area of game art. I've mainly worked on characters and creatures, but I want to expand into other areas of game art.

Thank you.

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[HughieDM]

pretty nice but I think that it is a bit noisy with the scratches and stuff
alot of the scratches same a bit big and random I would bull them to the corners and edges maybe a select few to the mid areas
also your drawer pulls need a bit more specularity then the wood to create material change they also seem a bit large in your unrap for being so small
but over all good work

[gsokol]

Looks good. Why did you get rid of the trim on the base that is in the hi poly? That looked nice. Your AO doesn't account for the handles...having a little bit of self shadow where they connect to the shelves would make them look less floaty.

[chriszuko]

I agree with gsokol... the lower trim on the hi-poly would have been a nice touch. Even if it adds a few more tri's