TRON - VEHICLE - ddoan88

[ddoan88]

Hey everyone I am thinking of doing a ship inspired by the Tron Clus Command Ship.

Here is a reference Image I am using for ship.
http://gottagrabbit.com/upload/20101028_220903_PROD_201738.jpg

[ddoan88]

Here is an update on the progress of this project.

Screenshots of wireframe and finished UV.

http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/ddoan888/screenshot_wire_01.jpg

http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/ddoan888/screenshot_UVs_01.jpg

[MattQ86]

Nice start.

[ddoan88]

Here is a my editor shot.
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/ddoan888/editorShot.jpg

[ddoan88]

Going to be working on in-game mock up shots and beauty shot.

[Conor]

I like the way you've redesigned the back part of the vehicle. I think you could have used some more polygons on the front arms, they're very sharp and could benefit from some bevels.

[ddoan88]

Here is In-Game Mock up image.
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/ddoan888/ingameMockUp.jpg

[ddoan88]

Attached is my beauty shot.
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/ddoan888/beautyShot.jpg

[ddoan88]

Editor View
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/ddoan888/editorShot_02.jpg

[Arkhange]

Don't forget to smooth the window on the front of your vehicle.
Right now on the Beauty shot we can see that it's still in Hard Edge.
The background on your Wireshot could be darker, right know the vehicle doesn't detach very well from it.
For the MockUp shot, I think it's your weakest point from all the shots.
The GUI don't really fit with the Tron universe. These small gray window can be improved I think. Try a more holographic render. The background seams to be a low qulity picture and I think that the eye get lost in your composition.
I'll try to give you a quick overpaint if I got some time today ;)
I hope that my crits doesn't sound to harsh, it's really to push your work forwrad, keep it up !

[ddoan88]

Please and thank you, any feedback and comments are welcome.