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shabba
07-02-2009, 11:37 AM
Hello everyone!
This is my first serious post on Polycount, and my first real attempt at sub-d modelling. The model is a digital turntable, I thought it had alot of interesting shapes that would make for good practice. It is not finished, I still have alot to do.

I'm really interested in getting feedback and criticism from the community. Wasted edges, or places that need more supporting loops, or just advice in general. If I should include other angles, or something else, please let me know.

Thanks! Hope you like it. Here it is!

Reference:
http://62emfw.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pOwBs_LvAZsqx8bE6xkO-cJ3Qb1xyOL-UK4OqcPiLfSgsH7kXdSiyLR0MtpEBsouJLjBeErgaUIzUpvM47 J4tIt4xedRINc4T/1098452107a.jpg

Model:
http://62emfw.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pBjrIzCx4JRe-K8C4KF5qUoUCudUEqd_gJD3257mpbMPsrydNHEdVtQSfJ9MxJp lZe_6ZHg2s39FLOcs_6M2h_JRhl0ihXACL/Turntable_1.jpg

http://62emfw.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pIR5Gp2HMHd94uuH6ra3i7TK-yjKdXVWwDzVsS1z_UGc_kamjSVTAKX-ZKy0tdbkMCdXXYPdSk7GvUIjQyIA-pkTcKDqbyRdp/Turntable_Wires.jpg

http://62emfw.bay.livefilestore.com/y1pngWMbak3W8nU7gb-vLMB5gmTYr8WfaoqowFcK_IPXbI-UK2ffjt-2JdOxE_VHTv5xZjVpkpoKLElfk11BAFa51KNiP0TWR8d/Turntable_2.jpg

http://62emfw.bay.livefilestore.com/y1ptLKmYXH3LWXWVMRsWBPOTzCI5yWdOkkdrUK7a6uE4OPnTDB Dg7DoLywERIfiWt5sov3yiaS401BYbOi_G7k-isJu9eqata76/Turntable_Wires2.jpg

Pedro Amorim
07-02-2009, 05:01 PM
is nice! i like! wawawe wa!
really, looks awesome :)

Turbosmooth Operator
07-02-2009, 06:43 PM
The only crit I can give is that most of the cylindrical buttons seem to be too recessed in your model compared to the real life counterpart.

imb3nt
07-02-2009, 07:03 PM
Looks awesome!
theres a tiny error on the left side of the circular button 3rd up on the right. also i agree with turbosmooth, some of the buttons can be pulled up a bit.

cant wait to see this one done!

killingpeople
07-03-2009, 07:01 AM
nice model

how did you achieve the effect, where the reflections meet in the center, on the top of the textured reset button

Pedro Amorim
07-03-2009, 07:10 AM
oh
wait a minute.
that top pic is a photo? is otught it was your render. you fail

shabba
07-03-2009, 07:43 AM
Thanks for the compliments and crits so far! I will definitely change those buttons, and good eye on that smoothing error!

nice model

how did you achieve the effect, where the reflections meet in the center, on the top of the textured reset button

That is a photo of the actual thing. It is my reference.

oh
wait a minute.
that top pic is a photo? is otught it was your render. you fail

I'm pretty sure I put "Reference:" above the photo, and "Model" above my renders, not to mention the thread title says "WIP". The fail wasn't on my end...

bounchfx
07-03-2009, 08:20 AM
the 'square' buttons' corners' are too round compared to the ref, and the switcher (thing on the bottom rightish of the ref) looks like 1. the gap around it is too big and 2. there's not really any room for it to 'switch' to the right. look at the ref carefully

also, the buttons on top middle of the turntable look like they come OUT a little from the top, not flush..

anyway, looks great!