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AcidLehmann
03-15-2009, 01:32 PM
My first time here in the forum and in Dominance Wars..
I'm just a student who likes to draw alot, and i really enjoyed this contest, so i decided to try something!
I hope you guys can gimme some suport, i'm just trying to increase my skills here :) Maybe in the future i'll be able to make some difference.

I'll bring some sketches soon!

Let the games begin!

AcidLehmann
03-15-2009, 02:28 PM
Some skecthes i just made.
i work only with scanner, i dont have a tablet :/
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1372/thi037.jpg

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3503/thi036.jpg

i'm thinking about a demon lord or prince.

#1 Demon lord type, brutal style
#2 Demon lord, i dont like it , looks like a dragon
#3 demon Prince
#4 same as 3
#5 Demon lord
#6 Demon Prince with warlord look
#7 Demon Prince with spider legs or smthing like that
#8 Polycount demon of total d00m

waiting for opinions!

Wicked-J
03-15-2009, 02:50 PM
#8, definitely 8

I like #6 but it's difficult to say since he doesn't have a lower body. I think #1 and #3 have the potential if you added more detail and form to them. Post some more thumbs with entire bodies, it's difficult to give crits on a character your creating when they are missing half their body design (unless that's how the design is intended).

Keep going, good start so far.

AcidLehmann
03-15-2009, 02:53 PM
ok, i'll try tomake them less simple..
i liked #1 and #3 too.. 6 i just added more detaisl then the others :]

thanks for the tips! i'll bring new stuff soon

AcidLehmann
03-15-2009, 03:41 PM
seems that no one is interested ..
anyway, some better sketches of #1 and #3

Thanks for the support Wicked.

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/5298/thi039.jpg

i made it fatter and i think i'll bring back the wings..

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5101/thi038.jpg

more details and some weapon variety

LeoDT
03-15-2009, 05:43 PM
I really liked the last snake-demon sketch...
You could add some skin/tissue stuff to it's back, like a naga or a jurassic park dinosaur like this one
http://www.phoxim.de/philip_bings_dilophosaurus/philip_bings_dilophosaurus1.jpg

Keep up the good work.

AcidLehmann
03-15-2009, 07:15 PM
well, no ones ever comments! lol
tried something digital now.. just to add some colors.. tomorrow i'll try new charactrs, dont want to get stucked on this guys only..

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6741/firstt.jpg

Eventide
03-16-2009, 10:21 AM
I really liked the last snake-demon sketch...
You could add some skin/tissue stuff to it's back, like a naga or a jurassic park dinosaur like this one
http://www.phoxim.de/philip_bings_dilophosaurus/philip_bings_dilophosaurus1.jpg

Keep up the good work.

Agreed I like the feel of the snake one as well. Don't worry about comments too much they will come. Keep in mind there are like 7 pages worth of entries to go through plus people are working on their own stuff. :) Keep it up :)

Yozora
03-16-2009, 10:34 AM
Yes I prefer snake thingy rather than big guy.

Also those bat-greentooths are cool, snake guy should have one of them as an avatar :p

AcidLehmann
03-16-2009, 05:26 PM
i'll keep it up then...
i'll think about different characters and classes .. and keep working on the snake guy too.

thanks for everything guys.

indian_boy
03-16-2009, 06:00 PM
yea the snake thing is much more impressive looking
i still suggest u keep things at a smaller scale at first, just to push around different ideas

rooster
03-16-2009, 06:19 PM
I kinda like the big guy, however I think we're going to see a lot of those.. maybe the snake would stand out better? keep going, plenty of time to keep plugging away at thumbs before settling on an idea.. usually if you keep going past the first few, some much more original stuff starts to appear

AcidLehmann
03-16-2009, 06:48 PM
thanks again guys!
well, i like to think while i'm drawing thats why they're so 'big'
i'll think about something different, thx again