Creature with hoofs, WIP

[schebbe]

Hello! first post here and would like to get some constructive criticism on a new character from you guys :)

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/3105/charsheet02qn4xg0.png (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=charsheet02qn4xg0.png)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/charsheet02qn4xg0.png/1/w1600.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img134/charsheet02qn4xg0.png/1/)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3867/charsheet01zb6hm9.png (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=charsheet01zb6hm9.png)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/charsheet01zb6hm9.png/1/w1148.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img156/charsheet01zb6hm9.png/1/)

[rdramsay1121]

Hey there, welcome to the forums! Looks like I'm the first to respond here. Anyway, nice sculpt you got going there, the arm muscles are well defined and correct. I think the sartorius and the rectus femoris could be a bit more defined (perhaps pushed in a bit more and set at an inner angle). A cleave in running down the middle of the abs could help as well.
Do you have a concept for this guy? It helps in comparison / crit since people can see how you translated the model from concept.

[Ro-Sham-Bo]

I would say its a good start , when i look at it though the bags on his shoulders look like purses and the wrinkes on them are not really in the right places. Besides that keep up the good work.