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08-14-2008, 01:43 PM
OH NO NOT MORE ANIME GIRL SHIT (http://openarena.ws/xdf/wiprender3.jpg)
instead of just leaving this in the WIP thread, I want you to tear me apart here (do your worst!). And no this is not leilei, in fact. it'll end up as original characters.
Current excuses, er i mean notes:
- She used to have a face, but I smoothed it because it sucked. I'll try sculpting a face again later (too late for subsurf)
- Hands are non-existent because i will do them seperately with gloves. Hands are so damn hard to model even though everyone here says it's easy.
- Toes don't exist since no one will be barefoot ingame anyway.
- She used to have a lot more defined muscles, but I smoothed all that out because it was *too* realistic, so realistic she looked like a ton of cellulite ingame (http://openarena.ws/xdf/test/dp000162.jpg) and that was ugly.
I assume she's meant to look like she has silicone breast implants?
The legs are pretty good. The arms look too thin... although it's hard to tell because you appear to have rendered it orthographically. Where is the perspective? It's much harder to judge proportions and stuff without perspective.
Obviously it should look better when she has a face and hands. It's not a bad start, but I'd really sort those boobs out.
08-14-2008, 01:56 PM
ahh my virgin eyes!
08-14-2008, 02:45 PM
You actually bothered to model the vag? You are a manly man.
08-14-2008, 03:11 PM
is this supposed to be porn? or is this inspired by...
- the face has some tris or other nasty poles in it it looks deformed at her cheeks
- like the legs- they have some interesting shapes
without a propper face and clothes or other deco stuff it looks like fan porn to me not art
08-14-2008, 05:23 PM
fan porn, art, whats the difference? hehe
vagina needs more lips.
jk man, looks alright, but whats the point of kootch and nipple modeling if you are going to put clothes over it? or are you just gonna have an naked anime chick in your portfolio?
08-15-2008, 04:35 AM
A portfolio? Like i'm gonna join the games industry xD
I assume she's meant to look like she has silicone breast implants?.
I take it the unsmoothed bridge between chest and upper breast gives the implant effect. I have solved this issue. Bust size is intentional.
New shots, this time i did the face, though i am unhappy with the hair since I haven't learned any shapely hair modeling techniques yet.
http://openarena.ws/xdf/wiprender4face3.jpg crotchview for cody and zaphir
Any resemblence or likeness to any character in existence is completely coincidental.
EDIT: Bald version, i've ditched the hair
08-15-2008, 06:20 PM
start a porn website, make some money.
looks good. you're progressing steadily, by the looks of things.
08-16-2008, 10:23 AM
Porn is a big industry, I'm sure you could get a few subscribers (everyone on here, haha)
08-16-2008, 02:10 PM
Porn? Why do you want me to make porn/hentai? Do you think I am?
08-16-2008, 06:27 PM
Actually, I was the pervert in this situation, haha.... Mmmmm... porn....
but on a serious note, why did you include the vagina in it? It seems a bit overkill, considering you will never see it (unless it is for porn :-p)
08-16-2008, 07:15 PM
how proud would you be if I told you I jerked off to that vag close-up?
08-19-2008, 03:19 PM
I HAVE A PROBLEM!:'(
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