View Full Version : Scream Park- WIP
03-07-2008, 04:08 PM
Hello there this is my first time of posting. Me and some outher guys are working on a game as our 2nd year final project. its a game using the Cryteck game engin.
You play as a guy with a shot gun, and ur mission is to save a girl from an evil clown. The game is based in a run down theme parl. hens the name.
I am lead character artis for the game. here is the evil Clown character.
03-07-2008, 08:03 PM
I love evil circus themed games (anyone remember CarnEvil?) /images/graemlins/smile.gif
You didn't specify if you do or don't want critiques, so I'll just go ahead and give one /images/graemlins/tongue.gif
Right now the clown has a few things that stick out as problem areas. First off, the belt seems incomplete, as their are no holes in it other then the one the buckle resides over, it has no visible end, and theirs also nothing holding it up (the cloth straps belts normally go through).
Another thing that bothers me is the hair. It looks like two wobbly cones sticking out of his head. Maybe it's supposed to look somewhat like that though as it appears to possibly be part of the half-mask the character seems to be wearing. Maybe I'm wrong on that, but it's how i appears to me.
I'm also wondering about the reason for the orange pads on his forearms. Do they serve a purpose? The red dots on his chest and stomach also have me wondering if they're bullet wounds, sense other then some red splattered at the bottom he doesn't seem to be bleeding from them.
03-09-2008, 01:38 PM
Hello there. lol i didn't come up with the idea the outher group member did. year crit is good. ok all the points u have brout up i have thoght about for the belt I hav ebeen looking into clowns a bit more and I am thinking of putting braces on him. I wasn't to shore of the belt any way. as for the bits on his arms, i want him to have botchers arm pads that are made out of leather. thats to go with the hole pyicoe clown theme. thanks for the help.
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