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IronHawk
06-12-2007, 10:46 AM
Rode my bike to work
Hot day outside kicked my ass
I eat doughnuts now


If your up for it this is a Haiku thread.
Have fun with it.
5 syllables then 7 and then 5 again.

Richard Kain
06-12-2007, 11:19 AM
I can't stand this job
Management hates designers
So very unfair

-yeah, I know, I'm a whiner

bounchfx
06-12-2007, 12:13 PM
drawing is hard work
especially feet and hands
i'm getting hungry

Joshua Stubbles
06-12-2007, 12:30 PM
My world now erodes
I'm artificial soldier
Here I lay to rest

Jaco
06-12-2007, 12:32 PM
ooh sounds like much fun
maybe soon I'll do one
later I will come

What a crap Haiko
Stinking reeking of mind shit
That was I farted

Just realised
I suck at making Haikus
and sound like yoda

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I will not lie that was lame

Joshua Stubbles
06-12-2007, 12:41 PM
dark and deep my soul
decaying now at worlds end
here I stand alone
--------------------
plasma springs erupt
the sulfur stench of rotting
my world in shambles

PeterK
06-12-2007, 12:45 PM
every problem
seems to land on my shoulders
what can I do now?

bounchfx
06-12-2007, 01:09 PM
verticies own me
push and pull and push and pull
oh fuck max just crashed

Xenobond
06-12-2007, 02:21 PM
Stayed at home today
played some City of Heroes
Taskforces are long.

acc
06-12-2007, 02:23 PM
Yaaaay, whining!

Hundred lines of code
Two hours of bug searching
Stupid capital

Flash costs way too much
But I am honourable
Ninjas don't pirate

Instead I go broke
Stupid indie studio
can have monayz plz?

Sectaurs
06-12-2007, 06:15 PM
Circus Peanuts rule!
Ninety-nine cent orgasm
Clean up; back to work

bounchfx
06-12-2007, 06:20 PM
did you know you could haiku
in other ways than five seven five
seven nine seven works too











...i think

Joshua Stubbles
06-12-2007, 06:30 PM
china town pwns me
it's time to eat my pocky
wipe my frown away
--------------------
deep inside my brain
a single thought causes strain
i should catch my train
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candles flickering
when will they go out
watch the wick burn down
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holding battle axe
these WoW nerds are fucking hax
it's time to pwn them

bounchfx
06-13-2007, 10:08 AM
waking up is gay
i want to sleep so much more
breakfast is nice though

Mishra
06-13-2007, 11:18 AM
i have been trying
to write a haiku for you
some things i just can't do

Joao Sapiro
06-13-2007, 11:29 AM
i dont even know
how to write an haiku
gotta learn more japanese

IronHawk
06-13-2007, 11:30 AM
that damn route at work
been trying for two weeks now
slopers love and hate

rolfness
06-14-2007, 07:36 AM
a a a a a
b b b b b b b
a a a a a
minimalist haiku

sad mad angry sad
happy happy laugh laugh
kill kill kill kill kill
Expressionist Haiku

Me fake fake
I am a fakey fake
give me your money
Damien Hirst Haiku

Neo_God
06-14-2007, 05:38 PM
Poor little bug thing
Content in its own small world
Envy for its life

I know...it's deep.

bounchfx
06-14-2007, 05:47 PM
haikus have meaning
at least most of the time, right?
well ok guess not

Snowfly
06-17-2007, 08:35 AM
bounchfx haikus
point to much bigger truths, yet
are simply written

this format's too short!
i keep running out of syl-
shit it happened ag-

bounchfx
06-17-2007, 12:52 PM
I know what you mean
this stuff is normally deep
I'm ruining it

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Nilium
06-17-2007, 12:55 PM
You're a bunch of fags,
Couldn't haiku worth a shit,
So I'll go jerk off.