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IronHawk
06-12-2007, 10:46 AM
Rode my bike to work
Hot day outside kicked my ass
I eat doughnuts now
If your up for it this is a Haiku thread.
Have fun with it.
5 syllables then 7 and then 5 again.
Richard Kain
06-12-2007, 11:19 AM
I can't stand this job
Management hates designers
So very unfair
-yeah, I know, I'm a whiner
bounchfx
06-12-2007, 12:13 PM
drawing is hard work
especially feet and hands
i'm getting hungry
Joshua Stubbles
06-12-2007, 12:30 PM
My world now erodes
I'm artificial soldier
Here I lay to rest
ooh sounds like much fun
maybe soon I'll do one
later I will come
What a crap Haiko
Stinking reeking of mind shit
That was I farted
Just realised
I suck at making Haikus
and sound like yoda
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I will not lie that was lame
Joshua Stubbles
06-12-2007, 12:41 PM
dark and deep my soul
decaying now at worlds end
here I stand alone
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plasma springs erupt
the sulfur stench of rotting
my world in shambles
PeterK
06-12-2007, 12:45 PM
every problem
seems to land on my shoulders
what can I do now?
bounchfx
06-12-2007, 01:09 PM
verticies own me
push and pull and push and pull
oh fuck max just crashed
Xenobond
06-12-2007, 02:21 PM
Stayed at home today
played some City of Heroes
Taskforces are long.
Yaaaay, whining!
Hundred lines of code
Two hours of bug searching
Stupid capital
Flash costs way too much
But I am honourable
Ninjas don't pirate
Instead I go broke
Stupid indie studio
can have monayz plz?
Sectaurs
06-12-2007, 06:15 PM
Circus Peanuts rule!
Ninety-nine cent orgasm
Clean up; back to work
bounchfx
06-12-2007, 06:20 PM
did you know you could haiku
in other ways than five seven five
seven nine seven works too
...i think
Joshua Stubbles
06-12-2007, 06:30 PM
china town pwns me
it's time to eat my pocky
wipe my frown away
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deep inside my brain
a single thought causes strain
i should catch my train
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candles flickering
when will they go out
watch the wick burn down
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holding battle axe
these WoW nerds are fucking hax
it's time to pwn them
bounchfx
06-13-2007, 10:08 AM
waking up is gay
i want to sleep so much more
breakfast is nice though
Mishra
06-13-2007, 11:18 AM
i have been trying
to write a haiku for you
some things i just can't do
Joao Sapiro
06-13-2007, 11:29 AM
i dont even know
how to write an haiku
gotta learn more japanese
IronHawk
06-13-2007, 11:30 AM
that damn route at work
been trying for two weeks now
slopers love and hate
rolfness
06-14-2007, 07:36 AM
a a a a a
b b b b b b b
a a a a a
minimalist haiku
sad mad angry sad
happy happy laugh laugh
kill kill kill kill kill
Expressionist Haiku
Me fake fake
I am a fakey fake
give me your money
Damien Hirst Haiku
Neo_God
06-14-2007, 05:38 PM
Poor little bug thing
Content in its own small world
Envy for its life
I know...it's deep.
bounchfx
06-14-2007, 05:47 PM
haikus have meaning
at least most of the time, right?
well ok guess not
Snowfly
06-17-2007, 08:35 AM
bounchfx haikus
point to much bigger truths, yet
are simply written
this format's too short!
i keep running out of syl-
shit it happened ag-
bounchfx
06-17-2007, 12:52 PM
I know what you mean
this stuff is normally deep
I'm ruining it
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Nilium
06-17-2007, 12:55 PM
You're a bunch of fags,
Couldn't haiku worth a shit,
So I'll go jerk off.
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